• schipelblorp@sh.itjust.works
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    8 days ago

    Kinda hard to read. The response in panel 3 seems unmotivated, and the witches switch sides, which is made worse by the fact they are largely identical except for hair.

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      8 days ago

      The author colored the text boxes, only thing more obvious would be a red circle and arrows…

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        8 days ago

        No it’s definitely bad, it’s like breaking the 180 rule in film

        And actually colouring the text boxes is not good either

        Lot of heart otherwise

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      7 days ago

      Yeah there was absolutely no reason for them to switch sides, really messes with readability. Could have easily flipped the image after drawing before the words were added.