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  • fireweed@lemmy.worldtoArt Share🎨@lemmy.worldSkin
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    6 days ago

    This is really good! I really like the use of color and the painting style is pleasing. The subtle shades of the background blending into her top are especially well done.

    If you’re looking for constructive criticism, the only two things that stood out were:

    • the earrings look to be different lengths (but I know earrings like that can appear asymmetrical in real life, so maybe it’s just an illusion of the angle)

    • I think the lower lip highlight is a touch too harsh and makes the lip look a bit flat and cartoonish; maybe needs a little smoothing, a thinner brush, or an additional “mid-light” layer?

    But these were little nitpicks after staring at the image for a while. Overall, very nice piece!



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  • I agree that

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    Jinx’s actions are extreme, but I think the writers do a satisfactory job of setting up the final scenes. They show Jinx overhearing Silco and her misunderstanding that he will turn her in to show her feeling cornered, they show her losing previous allies like Vi and Ekko to emphasize how she feels completely abandoned, and they show her suffering hallucinations to demonstrate her fragile mental state. What she does is sad but completely tracks with her character and the setup from previous scenes. Then her attack on the council is (I interpreted) a means of lashing out after Silco dies, while also to get revenge and honor him in a way that she thinks would have made him proud. Again, completely tracks with the setup.




  • S1 did an excellent job of its storytelling, such as show don’t tell; character actions driving the plot, not the other way around; and well-written villains with clear motives. S2 fell flat on a lot of those fronts. I’d need to rewatch it for a proper write-up, but some examples from what I remember:

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    Jinx (and to a lesser degree Vi when interacting with Jinx) acts in a number of ways that felt entirely plot-driven. I could not take the entire Vander comes back plot line seriously (the emotional moments felt forced and cheesy). Isha was a really weak character, obviously only there for Jinx’s character development (no wonder they made her mute). It seemed like characters got killed off based on whether their survival would be inconvenient for the plot (e.g. Maddie, Loris, Isha, Vander). The Jayce torture felt excessive. Ekko turns into an exposition-spewing device. The AU plot line was forgettable. Neither Ambessa nor Viktor remotely matched Silko in terms of being a good villain. Minor characters in S2 aren’t anywhere near as rich and fleshed-out as those of S1.

    A lot of what made S1 great continues over into S2, such as the soundtrack and animation. But the character development, writing, and little details just didn’t match up in S2.